Thursday, 3 July 2008

Kajal

The Twentieth century was a time with many discoveries.
The twentieth century changed the life span in 2011 was 75 for women and for men it was 90. In 2001 the life expectancy was 80 for women the life expectancy has really increased. In 1918 boys could expect to live until they were 44 and girls until they were 50 increased the most during the twentieth century.

New houses increased lifespan because more people were being treated in hospital and getting permission to buy new homes so it has increased. The British government had asked working men to lay down their lives in the First World War. The government pledged it would do something decisive about the housing problem to ensure that after the war soldiers came back to homes fit for heroes the government changed his plan.

Cleaner air has increased life expectancy by the government changing the air quality. In the twentieth century air quality in many industrial cities was still appalling the air pollution such as pottery factories had destroyed the air pollution.

Nhs has made people live longer and increased in the twentieth century by new ambulances, vaccination, health centres, family doctors, medicine for the sick, dentist, blood transfusion, specialists and hospitals. One of the main reasons why are now living longer is the government discovered x-ray machine’s and Dna scans.
Nhs also controls medical training and research e.g. maternity and child welfare, health visiting for the ill people, reaching hospitals for emergency’s and medical hospitals.

Overall I think the government has used new science technology, x-ray vision, Dna, improvements being made in medical health, communications and attitudes to improving on medical health.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I think Kajal should get a U because she is a "waste gyal" Jokin

I think Kajal should get a B/C because includes a lot of evidence and expands on most of her answers.To improve her essay she can compare the 18th century to the 19th century and say what improved and what did'nt improve.